MYA:
LOVE the POV stuff - that’s really current at the moment, great way of adding interest on a budget. Take out the black flashes around 1 minute. They’re distracting - the piece has a really nice feel that’s easy to get lost in. The black flashes draw attention to the editing process. The time-lapse and POV content make for a really honest and almost documentary-esque feel - very nice. The narrative needs to end: Does she go back to sleep? Give the narrative a nice circular structure. It almost feels like a complete day in the life, make sure it’s rounded off at the end. If she can’t shoot any more, end on a time-lapse of the sun setting perhaps. Somethings a little garish about the vocal performance - maybe hide with a black and white grade?