Annika
I like the colour scheme and the photos are good quality and
the artist looks pretty. On the image with black writing the word ‘stay’ is a
bit unclear and could be put in a more bold text to make it stand out more.
Personally not a big fan of the text of the song titles as it is a bit hard to
read or it should be bolder. Needs to be finished.
AVA
I really like the red theme. I prefer the pictures used on
the red digipack so I think you should use those pictures just make the theme
yellow. I really like the front cover picture and I think it has good editing
on it. The left cover is a bit boring so maybe put some text over it or another
picture on top of it. I also really like the back cover picture and think that
is very original. Although you need to show synergy between the digipack and
the website and the video.
Avenue
I like the top three pictures where it is the boys where the
lyrics cover their faces as I like the black and white and then the pop of
colour on their faces. I think there is
a big difference between the top row of photos and the bottom row of faces and
it looks quite messy. I like the front cover but personally don’t really like
the background you have used on the bottom row of photos. I think the text on
the list of songs on the album should maybe be in a bolder colour so that it
stands out more. I think the colour of the cd which is grey doesn’t go with the
theme of the digipack or the yellow writing on the CD. The yellow writing on
the CD should maybe be changed to either red, blue or green so that it matches
with the rest of the digipack.
Iuris
I really like your digiack! I think it is really unique and
different and fits well with your video and your website. I really like all of
the pictures you have used as none are in the same location yet they are
similar because the artist is wearing the same clothes. As your artist is quite
‘hipster’ I think you have showed this in the digipack. I really like all of
the writing around all of the images as I think it is very unique and
different.
Tori Lorente
I like the colour scheme on the digipack but there has to be
synergy with the video so is there black and white scenes in your video? I
really like the picture you have used for the front cover but I think the text
on this picture needs to be bigger and bolder as it is the front cover so it
needs to stand out. I think the picture on the bottom left and the top left
should have some writing or something over the top of it so that they are a bit
more interesting.
Ivory
I really like the front cover picture you have used and I
really like where you have placed the text and the font of the text. I think
you should have a more interesting picture for the CD and a more interesting
background for the CD rather than just plain grey. I think the picture of the
woods is a bit random as it is in black and white and your video is in colour
and it is a bit too plain and boring. I like the picture of Tilly with her
lipstick smudged as that shows synergy with the video. I think the writing that
you have used for the list of songs needs to be bolder.
Luella
I like the red and black theme as this is also shown in your
video. I think the CD picture and the picture of the red smoke are very similar
and shouldn’t be placed next to each other or add some text or a picture over
the top to make them more different. I like how you have written the song
titles as I think the white writing stands out from the red and black in the
picture. I don’t personally like the picture of the pond with the song lyrics
on as I think the picture is too empty so maybe you should put the text all
over the whole picture.
Stellato Star
I really like the front cover, I think the text is in a good
place and it stand out also I like the colours used. I like the picture you
have used for behind the songs on the album but I think the red writing doesn’t
really stand out from the picture so maybe you should put it in white or make
it bolder so that it stands out more from the picture behind it. I like how you
have done the CD. I think the black and white picture is a bit too similar to
the front cover so maybe you should change that do a different picture or put
some editing on it to make it more different from the front cover.
Sempa
I like the editing used on the top left and bottom middle
picture as it makes them different and unique. I like the picture on the top
right as it goes well with the video but I think it could have some writing to
something on it to make it a bit more interesting and eye-catching. I think the
picture with the ‘keep clear’ sign is quite plain and maybe you should use the
black and white for the front cover as it is the most interesting picture.
Heidi Holmes
I don’t really think there is much synergy with the video
and the digiack as there is a lot of pink on the digipack. I like the picture
you have used for the front cover as the artist is represented well. I like how
the theme of travel is shown through the whole digipack. I personally don’t
really like the bottom left picture as the text is not very bold and doesn’t
stand out very much. I think the picture of the shoes and the leaves doesn’t
really go with the digipack as it is a lot of black which isn’t in the rest of
the digipack and it is a bit cliché.